Unsung heroes

[Pie no sauce]

[Neil Appleby]

Very nice work PNS.
You've obviously thought deeply about this topic.
There is commendable depth and an excellent attempt to extrapolate the frustrations of being a senior player
whilst at the same time cope with the unbridled expectations of supporters. Perhaps next time you couls enlarge MM's role to show his Caring and Sharing side.
This is a good first-up effort Lawrie and i'm sure after re-drafting, you may file this as a "satisfactory completed" piece.
Please see me if you would like to talk this over(you provide the ticket to Honkers!).
Grading: B
gee, school doesn't even start till next week....I can't wait!
Seriously though, coudn't we have had Patto walking home via the train tunnel at Vic Park and seeing a mugging in progress, for once decides to get into the action and subsequently severely injured from a knife wielding member of The Unofficial Cheer Squad and is carried bloodied and beaten by one of Sly's Neo Nazi
Hoon boys to hospital where it is revealed that he has had a severly reduced heart(opposite of an enlarged heart) and needs an immediate transplant otherwise the consequences are dire:
body tremors and rigamortis will set in in the immediate vicinity of a pack or a hard ball get.
Patto leaves hospital alone to contemplate his future.

[Sly]

I have Neo Nazi hoons at my disposal? When did this occur? Why was I left out of the loop?

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